Ring of Skulls! (Continued)
A Short Story2 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Again, thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
Now Hell can be a little perplexing especially when your heading in the wrong of direction. (you're)
You have to realize that Tome is never perfect or on time (not sure about this, but did you mean Time???? I'm not sure Tome works here.)
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Again, thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
Now Hell can be a little perplexing especially when your heading in the wrong of direction. (you're)
You have to realize that Tome is never perfect or on time (not sure about this, but did you mean Time???? I'm not sure Tome works here.)
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thanks Barbara and I will present the second part later.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was enjoyable. I love the imagery from the rusty penny and a burned cigarette. That along with the references to Hell add to your poem and the message you are sharing. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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This was enjoyable. I love the imagery from the rusty penny and a burned cigarette. That along with the references to Hell add to your poem and the message you are sharing. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Michael.And I will present the second part of this a little bit later on.Today.
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