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Baa Baa's Response

The sheep's response to Baa Baa Black Sheep.

3 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Cute response to Baa Baa Black Sheep. I enjoyed reading and the rhyming scheme was very good. I had fun reading. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for you kind words. I too enjoyed writing this poem because it gave me a chance to silly and child-like with my writing. I appreciate the awesome review.
Comment from BOO ghost
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Yep, don't ask me for my wool if I'm the black sheep of the family! Cute poem. The bold black font matches the black sheep. Oh, it's a contest entry. Contests aren't easy to win unless you got good friends! Well, wish you luck in this contest! I see it's Poem For A Child, contest. This looks fitting and promising. Thanks for sharing! BOO!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for reading my work, your kind words are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Exceptional
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Very cute little poem, and yes is funny and suitable for children read. What can I add more? "Baa Baa Townsfolk, Don't ask for my wool.
No, Please, Please, No, Begging isn't cool.
Too much for the Master,
Even more for the Dame,
Not even enough for the boy, oh that's lame.
Baa Baa Townsfolk, Don't ask for my wool.
No, please, please, no, Stop asking for my wool."

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for reading my work and providing me with your kind words.