Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written entry for the dialogue only writing contest. You used very cute and very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024

Thank you for enjoying my writing. Also, for your kind review.

reply by Teri7 on 03-Aug-2024

You are so welcome! I enjoy your work!

reply by Teri7 on 06-Aug-2024

You are so welcome! My husband and I have many cats. For some reason they land in our front yard or in our garden! It's hard not to feed the little ones. love and blessings, Teri

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024

Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Deborah,
This sweet tale is a great entry for the dialogue-only contest. (I find this type of contest to be difficult to write).
The ending is a great twist.
I have a dog who gets tangled in my feet every once in awhile. She's learned my walking pattern by now, though.
A great entry, Deborah.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024

Thank you very much.

Comment from Karen Dougherty Estep

Good

At first I had trouble following the dialogue, but I caught up! I enjoyed the punch line in the end and your graphic choice is excellent! Keep on writing!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024

Thank you for the encouragement to keep on writing.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great story told though dialogue. I think it's a wonderful entry to the contest. I never would have seen that ending coming! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024

Thank you liking the ending to my story.