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Recently, I received a call from my brother.
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Comment from
LJbutterfly
Your story is well written with adequate description, allowing the reader to easily envision each scene, as well as your brother scrolling. It is unfortunate what cell phones and tablets have done to destroy relationships. I've seen families at restaurants with each member's head down as they get lost in a phone.
I enjoyed your conversational style of storytelling, as though you're talking to old friends. Hopefully, your brother changes his ways before it's too late. I wish you the very best in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
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Michael Ludwinder
This writing really drew me in with its raw, heartfelt emotion and excellent storytelling. I could feel the frustration you felt with your sister in law are palpable. I thought your candid, yet respectful, approach to addressing your brother's behavior was perfect. It's clear you care deeply about both of them and hope to inspire change. I hope he takes your words to heart and starts to make the changes necessary to improve their relationship.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
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