Comment from Sueswrite

Excellent

What a terrific story! I truly enjoyed the precise visual in my mind from the great wording structure! Our mind can create its own masterpiece demanding a stubborn ownership of a vision that could, perhaps, be just a lively imagination. Either way, the result is a great story! Best of luck to you!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

Lovely review, Sue. Much appreciated. Thanks.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a heartwarming piece! I truly enjoyed reading about your memories and the playful bond that you shared with your father. Your writing is excellent. Read it made me feel as though I was right there with you, experiencing every humorous and touching moment. Thank you for sharing such a precious slice of life!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024

Yet another warm, thoughtful and uplifting review. Thank you so much, Michael.

Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

This story is very good! I wish I had some tales like this to tell about my life so far. Thanks for sharing and happy writing! Also, good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024

Thank you, Lindsey. Your comments are appreciated.