Like the Leaf
A poem of holding on and letting go.3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I like the parallel between the leaf and a young child. The descriptions were wonderful. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I like the parallel between the leaf and a young child. The descriptions were wonderful. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you ever so much for your review. I truly appreciate your comments.
Comment from nancy Laine
Outstanding job of interweaving throughout the piece. I enjoyed the comparisons between leaf and human growth and eventual death. Great symbolism. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Outstanding job of interweaving throughout the piece. I enjoyed the comparisons between leaf and human growth and eventual death. Great symbolism. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you ever so much for the review. The six stars are absolutely appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and your presentation is exquisite. I enjoyed very much listening to it and it moves along very well. Our lives are like that leaves that wants to let go, but it's afraid to let go. many times in life. We get hurt by people and we are afraid to let go of the hurt but we all have to do that very thing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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This is very nicely written and your presentation is exquisite. I enjoyed very much listening to it and it moves along very well. Our lives are like that leaves that wants to let go, but it's afraid to let go. many times in life. We get hurt by people and we are afraid to let go of the hurt but we all have to do that very thing. Patricia.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for reviewing and for the comments.