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Comment from BOO ghost
The eagle flies! A delightful poem, mixed with enthusiasm and wrapped in mystery. Who said, "a nation divided will fall"? Hello, America is divided, split into opposite sides that bicker. Plus, there's no term limits for fraudulent politicians in Congress, setting up a staunch cesspool of corruption. Humans have destroyed this planet out of greed. The swamp needs to be drained! Think you opened a can of worms, Rickey, The only way America will change is to rid the crooked leaders overseeing everything and writing the rules. Breaking our border immigration rules. So, why not obey our other rules? Nicely written! Oh, I ran out of stars. I only got two six stars instead of six? A bug?
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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The eagle flies! A delightful poem, mixed with enthusiasm and wrapped in mystery. Who said, "a nation divided will fall"? Hello, America is divided, split into opposite sides that bicker. Plus, there's no term limits for fraudulent politicians in Congress, setting up a staunch cesspool of corruption. Humans have destroyed this planet out of greed. The swamp needs to be drained! Think you opened a can of worms, Rickey, The only way America will change is to rid the crooked leaders overseeing everything and writing the rules. Breaking our border immigration rules. So, why not obey our other rules? Nicely written! Oh, I ran out of stars. I only got two six stars instead of six? A bug?
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Yea the bullsh** is on the stove and the pots boiling over as usual.
Thanks Boo long time no see?
Doctor Ricky 1024
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I was in hibernation.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Do not believe America is dying. People have been crying that fallacy since the country began.
She always comes back much stronger than she was before.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Do not believe America is dying. People have been crying that fallacy since the country began.
She always comes back much stronger than she was before.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I know Brett.The reason for this that America is dying.It's to give us on awakening and strengthening us with an upcoming presidential election.
Thsnks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Earl Corp
I intend to vote but I'm not sure what you mean by voting properly the choices we have suck.
oprning should be opening
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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I intend to vote but I'm not sure what you mean by voting properly the choices we have suck.
oprning should be opening
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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When I don't like about the elections is slush bashing.
In other words they're like little children pointing out in perfections.
Look for the one that does at the loss.
People don't like to see advertisements of negativity When it comes to a presidential election.
There should be two mature adults involved.
Thanks for your review.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written poem my friend. You used amazing imagery and very true words. I am with you on voting for the right person. I believe He, along with the help of God, can make America great again! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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This is a very interesting and well written poem my friend. You used amazing imagery and very true words. I am with you on voting for the right person. I believe He, along with the help of God, can make America great again! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thanks Teri for dropping by again.
Doctor Ricky
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
This next election scares me, we have no real candidate running.
Good morning My America and our neighbor Canada is again in our way. (comma after 'America,' you're addressing it)
Was busy oprning a can of Starkist tuna.? (opening & either the period or question mark, but not both.)
of all Jumankinds birth. (Humankinds???)
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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This next election scares me, we have no real candidate running.
Good morning My America and our neighbor Canada is again in our way. (comma after 'America,' you're addressing it)
Was busy oprning a can of Starkist tuna.? (opening & either the period or question mark, but not both.)
of all Jumankinds birth. (Humankinds???)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the review Batbara and corrections too!
Doctor Ricky
