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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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I love the way you "re-invent" ordinary objects and then make them the subject of your creative poetry. You are the consummate creative soul. I love the way your mind works! xoxo

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Rachelle

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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A cleverly expressed and presented Haiku.
Both words and image complement perfectly to present a clear connection between the two elements
An eye catching presentation.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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cool haiku
interesting how you compared a flower with church bells
nicely done with good imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    thank you very much, Shelley 😊

    gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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Great use of the double meaning of angel trumpets as you have the beautiful flower in your picture and we can imagine the trumpeting of the angels to welcome a child of God Home! Lovely!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Big Sister. 😊

    Love

    marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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While living in Germany, I would always pause and reflect when I heard the church bells. They were beautiful and them sounding was always a time to reflect. Thank you for bringing that memory back.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    thank you very much, Barbara 😊

    gypsy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Absolutely gorgeous picture. Good clear writing.
I do love Haiku. How to say so much with so little.
It drives me crazy sometimes, but when I succeed, I feel wonderful. It is like puzzles, they drive me nuts, but I love them. Have a marvelous week. Karen

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much

    Gypsy😊
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 09-Jul-2024
    :-)