Failing!
Too ironic, and funny.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Oh boy. I can relate to this. I think your poem is so funny. It's so honest about the struggles everyone (I believe it is everyone!) faces with diets. I love your sense of humor in your poem. And it's well written! The line "Lettuce leaves by the yard" is so perfect! It sounds so gross! Great job! This is a fun and enjoyable poem and reminds me why I don't diet! haha
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Oh boy. I can relate to this. I think your poem is so funny. It's so honest about the struggles everyone (I believe it is everyone!) faces with diets. I love your sense of humor in your poem. And it's well written! The line "Lettuce leaves by the yard" is so perfect! It sounds so gross! Great job! This is a fun and enjoyable poem and reminds me why I don't diet! haha
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks for feedback.
Comment from jessizero
I got a kick out of this "story in a poem." I know what it's like to give up losing. LOL. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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I got a kick out of this "story in a poem." I know what it's like to give up losing. LOL. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks for feedback.