Reviews from

2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Viewing comments for Chapter 142 "His Heart Flutters"
x

8 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I am sure it would feel amazing if when entering a room a heart would flutter. I like the idea of that. WOW!!!! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

The Fluttering Heart as thr fluttering and Beautiful wings of a Butterfly.
Well presented Haiku Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this Gypsy and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi Gypsy, your poem has good imagery and sensory appeal. I could see the entire scene. Of special note: the butterfly. To him, she is the most beautiful butterfly in the world. This poem made me smile. Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M


 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

aw this was so sweet... butterfly kisses!
wonderfully emotional haiku with great imagery

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
....................................

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

That is so indicative of the kingdom of life. This happens with humans as well.
I like you straightforward words and the accompanying photo.
Thanks for sharing this beautifully presented poem.
RJ

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much,

    Gypsy
Comment from Lindsey Russell
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Another beautiful poem. A very sweet haiku. I can't say that it needs any improvement. Good luck with your writing endeavors and thanks for sharing this!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

this is very beautifully written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is lovely. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very good week. Patric.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I'm wondering if she's the "butterfly" - perhaps she's the social butterfly and has lots of romantic possibilities and he's the introvert who can only keep his fluttering heart wanting to say what he feels...

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Good, the haiku leaves a lot to think about. I was thinking is a guy and a girl but his heart flutters like the butterfly.

    Love

    Marival ❤️