2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am sure it would feel amazing if when entering a room a heart would flutter. I like the idea of that. WOW!!!! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
I am sure it would feel amazing if when entering a room a heart would flutter. I like the idea of that. WOW!!!! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
The Fluttering Heart as thr fluttering and Beautiful wings of a Butterfly.
Well presented Haiku Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this Gypsy and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
The Fluttering Heart as thr fluttering and Beautiful wings of a Butterfly.
Well presented Haiku Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this Gypsy and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem has good imagery and sensory appeal. I could see the entire scene. Of special note: the butterfly. To him, she is the most beautiful butterfly in the world. This poem made me smile. Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
Hi Gypsy, your poem has good imagery and sensory appeal. I could see the entire scene. Of special note: the butterfly. To him, she is the most beautiful butterfly in the world. This poem made me smile. Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aw this was so sweet... butterfly kisses!
wonderfully emotional haiku with great imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
aw this was so sweet... butterfly kisses!
wonderfully emotional haiku with great imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
That is so indicative of the kingdom of life. This happens with humans as well.
I like you straightforward words and the accompanying photo.
Thanks for sharing this beautifully presented poem.
RJ
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
That is so indicative of the kingdom of life. This happens with humans as well.
I like you straightforward words and the accompanying photo.
Thanks for sharing this beautifully presented poem.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy
Comment from Lindsey Russell
Another beautiful poem. A very sweet haiku. I can't say that it needs any improvement. Good luck with your writing endeavors and thanks for sharing this!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
Another beautiful poem. A very sweet haiku. I can't say that it needs any improvement. Good luck with your writing endeavors and thanks for sharing this!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
this is very beautifully written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is lovely. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very good week. Patric.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
this is very beautifully written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is lovely. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very good week. Patric.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I'm wondering if she's the "butterfly" - perhaps she's the social butterfly and has lots of romantic possibilities and he's the introvert who can only keep his fluttering heart wanting to say what he feels...
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
I'm wondering if she's the "butterfly" - perhaps she's the social butterfly and has lots of romantic possibilities and he's the introvert who can only keep his fluttering heart wanting to say what he feels...
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Good, the haiku leaves a lot to think about. I was thinking is a guy and a girl but his heart flutters like the butterfly.
Love
Marival ❤️