Holding It on I-95 N
A Wild Ride for A Much Needed Rest13 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Pardon me, I thought you were a lady. It says on you page that "he" Is a top ranked author. If this is a mistake go to your messages and pick the contact button and tell Tom. He usually fixes stuff within 24 hours. Great story. We shoulda tied! But, sorry I ain't giving the points back. hahaha Karen
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Pardon me, I thought you were a lady. It says on you page that "he" Is a top ranked author. If this is a mistake go to your messages and pick the contact button and tell Tom. He usually fixes stuff within 24 hours. Great story. We shoulda tied! But, sorry I ain't giving the points back. hahaha Karen
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
That was quite the ride to the P-stop and I would imagine the lesson learned was equally absorbed by the sister with the desire to teach her sister a traveling point.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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That was quite the ride to the P-stop and I would imagine the lesson learned was equally absorbed by the sister with the desire to teach her sister a traveling point.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Yes, it was!!! Thanks for your review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Oh, for the memories, unpleasant though they may be, for see, I too, have experienced the dreaded I-95 corridor. I m thankful I left Philly for parts in the South in 65 and haven't the scars to prove it.
That said, I confused at the ending.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Oh, for the memories, unpleasant though they may be, for see, I too, have experienced the dreaded I-95 corridor. I m thankful I left Philly for parts in the South in 65 and haven't the scars to prove it.
That said, I confused at the ending.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Yes, I 95 is a trip. Glad you no longer have to deal with it. Thanks for your review!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! As the girl who's had the nickname "Betty Bladder" my entire life since college, I can SOOOOOOOO very identify with this story!! I, though, am quite sure I would have just stood out in the the rain and peed right there standing up, since I was getting drenched anyway. What's a little more water, just warm and running down my leg?
You handled it like a champ. And made some fabulous lemonade (i.e. this story) from your lemons). I love the ending!! xoxo
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! As the girl who's had the nickname "Betty Bladder" my entire life since college, I can SOOOOOOOO very identify with this story!! I, though, am quite sure I would have just stood out in the the rain and peed right there standing up, since I was getting drenched anyway. What's a little more water, just warm and running down my leg?
You handled it like a champ. And made some fabulous lemonade (i.e. this story) from your lemons). I love the ending!! xoxo
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Betty Bladder for your thoughtful and funny review!! Appreciate it!
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You are certainly welcome!!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have very good very effective use of illusion. You're setting is excellent also which enhances the plot which doesn't seem to know how to quit Oh this is excellent. There is a bit of a gallows chuckle that must be elicited with the reader who possibly can identify.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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You have very good very effective use of illusion. You're setting is excellent also which enhances the plot which doesn't seem to know how to quit Oh this is excellent. There is a bit of a gallows chuckle that must be elicited with the reader who possibly can identify.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for your positive and thoughtful review!
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent story. And very well written. Should be a winner.
The only thing is the 80 in a 65. That's just a stroll through the park. I do that when i have an empty bladder and all the time in the world. 90 would come closer to making your point.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Excellent story. And very well written. Should be a winner.
The only thing is the 80 in a 65. That's just a stroll through the park. I do that when i have an empty bladder and all the time in the world. 90 would come closer to making your point.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks for your positive review and your observation! If I use this story again, I will definitely make that change!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Hahaha! Been there, done that, except not from a cold brew. This is fiction, but it reads like a true event. That's what makes it such a good story. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Hahaha! Been there, done that, except not from a cold brew. This is fiction, but it reads like a true event. That's what makes it such a good story. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for positive review!! Appreciate it.
Comment from Begin Again
Oh lord, help me! Being pregnant would have even made it worse if that was at all possible. It seemed that every card possible was being played against you. Loved your spirit and also the cold brew.
Great job!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Oh lord, help me! Being pregnant would have even made it worse if that was at all possible. It seemed that every card possible was being played against you. Loved your spirit and also the cold brew.
Great job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks carol for your upbeat review! Appreciate it very much!
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Thanks carol for your upbeat review! Appreciate it very much!
Comment from Sharon Elwell
Perfect use of language to share a feeling everyone has experienced in such a lively and engaging way! It takes skill to bring common things to life with originality. Nice work!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Perfect use of language to share a feeling everyone has experienced in such a lively and engaging way! It takes skill to bring common things to life with originality. Nice work!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Wow--thx so much for a six star review! Your positive comments made my day. Appreciate it!
Comment from prettybluebirds
This was my first thought regarding the contest, too. How often have we had to pee so badly that it felt like our teeth were floating and we had no place to go? This is an excellent entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This was my first thought regarding the contest, too. How often have we had to pee so badly that it felt like our teeth were floating and we had no place to go? This is an excellent entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much!!! Appreciate it!
