Butchered...
Poachers are criminals . I have no mercy for them.4 total reviews
Comment from pookietoo
This is a great 3-5-3 entry. I still wish I could enter all contests, but as you know I cannot. Keep up the wonderful work! Thanks for being a good friend. I hope all is well with you. Have a wonderful day.
This is a great 3-5-3 entry. I still wish I could enter all contests, but as you know I cannot. Keep up the wonderful work! Thanks for being a good friend. I hope all is well with you. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
It is terrible that poachers do that to animals! Your post, in rhymes, describes the horrible situation found too often to occur in our world.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
It is terrible that poachers do that to animals! Your post, in rhymes, describes the horrible situation found too often to occur in our world.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This poem is so moving with so little said. This work proves that sometimes less is more. I felt anger, sadness, and loneliness simultaneously. Great work and good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
This poem is so moving with so little said. This work proves that sometimes less is more. I felt anger, sadness, and loneliness simultaneously. Great work and good luck!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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When I saw the photo, I also felt sadness and anger towards these heartless people.
Not even mothers are spared.
Luckily the rangers arrived in time at least for the tiny rhino ..he would have been an easy meal for predators.
Comment from jessizero
This was a tragic (though well-written) poem. You got the syllable count and subject matter right for the contest, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
This was a tragic (though well-written) poem. You got the syllable count and subject matter right for the contest, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Such a cruel act. Not even mothers are spared.
I believe the poor tiny tyke was taken to a rehabilitation center by the rangers.
He did stand a chance on his own in the wild, certainly an easy meal for predators.