Unfinished Brushstrokes
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18 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
Hey, there I'm back again...I keep trying. Lol.
You weren't discreet when you argued with Eleanor at the *galley* the other day."
(Should this be gallery?)
Eleanor, perched on the mantel, smiled and thought, "It's not over yet, not by a long shot."
(Thoughts should be in italics, not quotes. Quotes=spoken)
she'd been well aware of how her family would react except for her murder.
(I didn't understand what this meant. The 'except' is throwing me off).
J
:-)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Hey, there I'm back again...I keep trying. Lol.
You weren't discreet when you argued with Eleanor at the *galley* the other day."
(Should this be gallery?)
Eleanor, perched on the mantel, smiled and thought, "It's not over yet, not by a long shot."
(Thoughts should be in italics, not quotes. Quotes=spoken)
she'd been well aware of how her family would react except for her murder.
(I didn't understand what this meant. The 'except' is throwing me off).
J
:-)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Good morning, Julie... I see as I am about to wrap thisstory up, you renenter my world to set me to work. Thank you, of course. I have made the changes and am on my way to the next.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I can feel the temperature rising and tempers flaring.
Nicely written with just the right mix of angst and intrigue.
There's certainly much finger pointing and unrest in this crowd.
Lead on author, lead on.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I can feel the temperature rising and tempers flaring.
Nicely written with just the right mix of angst and intrigue.
There's certainly much finger pointing and unrest in this crowd.
Lead on author, lead on.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Glad you are enjhoying the story. Theres much more to come. I hope you are thrilled,
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm amazed that you are even familiar with the color names of Levi's, but why would I have ever doubted you staying up with the particulars on everything. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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I'm amazed that you are even familiar with the color names of Levi's, but why would I have ever doubted you staying up with the particulars on everything. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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So I can amaze you huh? Good for me...lol Doubt me because I do...losing my mind over this story. I've got the word count but the story is only half done. Bummer! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Money grubbing numbskulls. Why is there so much greed? Their need can never be met. They are trying to fill a hole that has no bottom.Good writing here.
Karen
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Money grubbing numbskulls. Why is there so much greed? Their need can never be met. They are trying to fill a hole that has no bottom.Good writing here.
Karen
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Been writing and reviewing all day. This is becoming a sixteen hour a day job and sometimes more. Thanks for reading, Karen
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preaching to the choir when we write we create a never ending pileup. karen
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Now there's a twist! Eleanor has given her family tasks in order to get their inheritance. We also learn that no one knew she had a lot of money, or that she painted under an assumed name. The ghost of Eleanor is bumping about causing mischief, while her loyal friend, Jenna.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Now there's a twist! Eleanor has given her family tasks in order to get their inheritance. We also learn that no one knew she had a lot of money, or that she painted under an assumed name. The ghost of Eleanor is bumping about causing mischief, while her loyal friend, Jenna.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I think she is enjoying payback for how many times she was ignored by her family because they thought she was old, poor and boring.
Smiles, Carol
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Good for her!!!!!!
Comment from tfawcus
Splendid pen picture of Craig Winslow and well contrasted against that of Detective Donatelli. Both leap from the page. Now a murder and Eleanor behaving like a poltergeist. Whatever next?
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Splendid pen picture of Craig Winslow and well contrasted against that of Detective Donatelli. Both leap from the page. Now a murder and Eleanor behaving like a poltergeist. Whatever next?
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Hang on! I am sure there will plenty more surprises down the road. I've never written a story quite like this one so it shall be an adventure for me as well. Thank you again for following along and for your kind remarks.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very good. I would not be able to put this book down. The poor woman had such a disgusting family, she certainly needed to teach them a lesson.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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This is very good. I would not be able to put this book down. The poor woman had such a disgusting family, she certainly needed to teach them a lesson.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Now that's what I like to here. I love a book (and a reader) when the book holds your attention and you can't stop reading. Best compliment yet!
Thank you so much.
Carol
Comment from royowen
Ah, Eleanor's a doppelgänger really, she can throw things around, she is fun loving, and a great sense of occasion, she had never had much use for money, but lots of talent, the callous recipients of the will will probably regret their attitudes. Heh heh, well done Carol, good post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Ah, Eleanor's a doppelgänger really, she can throw things around, she is fun loving, and a great sense of occasion, she had never had much use for money, but lots of talent, the callous recipients of the will will probably regret their attitudes. Heh heh, well done Carol, good post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Yes, Eleanor cares more about people than she does money. And she definitely believes in having fun. I think she will be a treat to have around.
Thanks so much, Roy.
Smiles, Carol
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She will indeed.
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She will indeed.
Comment from Esther Brown
Oh this is going to be fun. You have formed some very strong characters and the plot moves quickly, not even allowing for my critical eye to find anything I can correct...smiles. Esther
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Oh this is going to be fun. You have formed some very strong characters and the plot moves quickly, not even allowing for my critical eye to find anything I can correct...smiles. Esther
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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After we get past the will reading, I think the chapters will move easier and faster. It's hard to get the tasks in place, but I hope Eleanor lightens the mood. LOL
Thank you as always. You are awesome!
S,miles, Carol
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Shucks. I have had to work and have been traveling...Can't wait to get back in the bubble and read. Smiling
Comment from Ulla
Ah, Carol, so you're.continuing with the ghosts. I like that. What a horrible family. You build this up nicely and I'm looking forward to seeing what the tasks are. A hug, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Ah, Carol, so you're.continuing with the ghosts. I like that. What a horrible family. You build this up nicely and I'm looking forward to seeing what the tasks are. A hug, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks Ulla...It's a fysfunctional family for sure...something I've had my share of. I hope Eleanor's thoughts are to help them not only find themselves but to help other at the same time. While someone solves her murder.
Smiles, Carol
