Summer scent
Poem 3/5/32 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I liked this 3-5-3 for the "nature" contest. You did a good job with the description. I can almost smell the hay now, and you got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I liked this 3-5-3 for the "nature" contest. You did a good job with the description. I can almost smell the hay now, and you got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures a serene moment. Loved the imagery! From the "sweet scent of / new mown hay" carried by the "July breeze" just worked so well. It brings with it a sense of rural life. Your poem transported me to a peaceful countryside setting. Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures a serene moment. Loved the imagery! From the "sweet scent of / new mown hay" carried by the "July breeze" just worked so well. It brings with it a sense of rural life. Your poem transported me to a peaceful countryside setting. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reviewing and sharing zanya