Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
This is fantastic! Your words capture how your feelings change from childhood innocence to adult desire. I love how you share a deep change in your perception of someone close to you. Great job in showing how your view of him changed over the years.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
Thank you so much for all the kind words. I chose to speak from the heart and personal experience on this one. I am happy that it was well received and that the feelings that I meant to convey were easily understood.
Comment from
davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my, Lakeshia, what a steamy story. It's a good story of children who grow up to be sweethearts. It's a classic tale of love that lasts through time. It's actually the basis behind my novel I'm writing right now. I love the idea.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
Thank you Rhonda for your kind words. I am glad that you liked my story and I am hoping that this love, my love story will last the test.