When Love Fails
Its flame slowly withers3 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
Your poem is more profound at second glance.
I know of relationships where one party is stifled and not able to grow as a person, because the other person is overly-jealous or too insecure to foster a meaningful relationship.
Great poem.
Good luck.
Cindy
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Author,
Your poem is more profound at second glance.
I know of relationships where one party is stifled and not able to grow as a person, because the other person is overly-jealous or too insecure to foster a meaningful relationship.
Great poem.
Good luck.
Cindy
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sad, but true, love sometimes does not last forever and as the flame dies, there is an inevitable end to the relationship. A poignant short for the contest, love Dolly x
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Sad, but true, love sometimes does not last forever and as the flame dies, there is an inevitable end to the relationship. A poignant short for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is so true... and your words concisely describe the sad situation of some relationships. It's an excellent entry for 5-7-5 contest. Best of luck to you.
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This is so true... and your words concisely describe the sad situation of some relationships. It's an excellent entry for 5-7-5 contest. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
