Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This story, The Youngest, is a terrific memory of being completely surrounded by love and the great joy of the happiest place on Earth. Hard to forget something like that.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!

This is a very touching poem of a child, remembering his or her parents in such a loving way

Here. Only one of your siblings can be the oldest. I think you are trying to say everyone was older. (Much older I think). Your brother and sister were adults already when you were three years old. That's what I think anyway.

" I was a three year old boy everyone in my family were the oldest. I was the only child around"

Here. It should be taught me

" They teach me how to be kind and helpful. I remember f"

Here I think you are trying to say that your and sister taught you to not be rude to people

Then, you should replace this whole thing with

' My brother and sister protected me. They taught me how to be kind and helpful and not to be rude to people'

" My brother and sister protected me. They teach me how to be kind and helpful. I remember for not being rude to people. "

I enjoyed reading your story

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024

Thank you!