Comment from Liliana Tricks

Excellent

Your words carry that clever spark, your creativity shines brightly. I hope you continue sharing your thoughts, let your voice resonate far and wide. Well done on your witty creation.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024

Thanks for a very encouraging review Zanya

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the Contact. Good luck with that!!

I think I see a problem here. Decrease means the same thing in both of your lines. I thought that you were supposed to have some thing that means something different in each line

So, I worry that your entry might not be valid

Although it does have a good sentiment and it states that very well. So if this wasn't a contest, I think this would've been great.

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024

Thanks for reading and sharing and spotting the error! Much appreciated. Zanya