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The Unfortunate Way of the World

The world has so many problems to deal with today.

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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

Your font made it almost impossible for me to read your poem. I almost skipped it. You have to consider that some of the viewers on this site are elderly and their eyesight isn't that good

I vote for the middle one. I vote for the dark clouds because our land is parched and we need rain. But when I compare that choice to the other two, I like that one better.

Of course, the worst choice is the bottom line where evil is speaking and acting

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you! I will take a look at the font and see about finding something easier to read.
Comment from Colorado Owl
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Good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. I've always tried to see the world as better than it was; that it's slowly improving. It's getting more difficult every day to do that! Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    You are correct, it gets more difficult every day. Thank you for reviewing.