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The Happy Day

The scene outside the Church, after the ceremony

2 total reviews 
Comment from RodG
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You PUT US THERE at the wedding where we, like all the other guests, toss confetti at the bride and groom as they leave the church. In my neck of the woods, the girl who catches the bridal bouquet will marry SOON, not necessarily next. Rod

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Rod. Appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
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I think this was a great poem for the writing prompt! You got the syllable count right, and your poem was joyful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much.