Baby is Home
I was happy to have my mother home.3 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
I love this. You do give the context for the benefit of readers. But then you enter the POV of your younger self and show the moment so clearly that I could feel the happiness of that family event.
Well done
Have you and your brother remained close? I hope so.
Good luck in the contest
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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I love this. You do give the context for the benefit of readers. But then you enter the POV of your younger self and show the moment so clearly that I could feel the happiness of that family event.
Well done
Have you and your brother remained close? I hope so.
Good luck in the contest
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Yes, we were close, but sadly he passed a year ago. I do miss him. Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.
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So sorry for your loss. May he rest in peace
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Thank you. We have good memories growing up together.
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This short piece, Baby is Home, is a cool memory to have which opens up your life as a sibling on the very first day. Dominic becomes the brother you never knew you wanted.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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This short piece, Baby is Home, is a cool memory to have which opens up your life as a sibling on the very first day. Dominic becomes the brother you never knew you wanted.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Great job! It sounds like a wonderful moment from your childhood! The imagery of standing on the porch, peering through the slats, and seeing your parents with your new baby brother is beautifully shared. It captures a special family moment so well. Great job on sharing this memory.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Great job! It sounds like a wonderful moment from your childhood! The imagery of standing on the porch, peering through the slats, and seeing your parents with your new baby brother is beautifully shared. It captures a special family moment so well. Great job on sharing this memory.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for the read and encouraging review. Appreciated.