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My Faith Journey

It has been a difficult journey.

17 total reviews 
Comment from joann r romei
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I'm glad you returned to the church, and as children of God we are supposed to fail so we can return to salvation and for the guidance of living the life destined for us.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
    With gratitude of my heart, I wish to thank you very much for a kind
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is more than a story of your faith. It is an amazing story of determination and strength to take control of your life.
Good luck in the contest
Mary

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from zanya
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A slice of real life shared here - thanks for sharing this personal event in life with us readers. It is a truly moving and inspiring account filled with Faith.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work and leave me such thoughtful comments. I appreciate it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is an endearing story Patricia. I didn't know you had a twin brother. You were a vulnerable girl and someone took advantage of you and you then had to shoulder the responsibility of what happened. Life can be hard and you suffered hardship at a young age. This incident brought you closer to your faith and delivered you on a journey to a good life. I enjoyed your honest words here, you are a good person Patricia, you were deceived in your youth and you found happiness with your husband. Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for your very kind review and also for your understanding. So many people do not understand how I person could be drugged and not remember anything that happened in any event.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 09-Jul-2024
    I fully understand this because this happens today to young girls Patricia x
Comment from Wendy G
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What an amazing story. Your story is witten meaningfully and from the heart. God was indeed at work despite everything, including the tragedy of having to give your child away. God restored you and gave you the joy of your husband and daughters. You were right. He is willing to save everyone, even someone like Saul. Yourlife is a testimony to His love and grace. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for your very understanding. And thanks for reading my story.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a powerful and emotional testimony and story. I admire you for sharing your horrible military experience and reason for your discharge. Was the baby ever adopted?

When I was a church musician, it was my job, during the minister's invitation to Christ, to quietly play Just As I Am, and softly sing the verses.

Your message is clear. God will forgive and accept you as you are. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for your very kind review. Joann a couple of questions for you. Yes, the son that I gave birth to there was adopted about three weeks after I gave birth to him. I was able to locate him when he was 35 years old because I had medical information that he needed for himself and for any of his children, this medical information had to do with disorders that could happen to someone because of heredity. I hope that answers your questions.
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Very heartfelt and sometimes very sad life story, but the outcome of a fulfilling life in Christ is encouraging ti say the least. There are a few typos that can be easily fixed. In your fourth paragraph from the bottom, it should read, "it was at this home I began." The third paragraph from the top should read, "I do not remember how I got back." The third paragraph from the bottom should read, "so I began to think."
This is a very compelling and well written true life story, with a few typos tgat can be easily corrected. I look forward to revisiting it at that time.
RJ

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so very much for your kind of you and for catching the typo I appreciate it. I think I got them all revised. Within the.
Comment from Mintybee
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That's a powerful testimony. That's some awful stuff you went through. I'm glad you found God and were redeemed from those circumstances. Thanks for sharing this part of your spiritual journey.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and kind review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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AMEN!!! In Sunday School we are studying 1 Peter. As flawed as Peter was Jesus used him to build His church. We God will use each one of us to promote His message. His grace covers us. Good luck with this wonderful contest entry.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. I am glad you enjoyed my nonfiction story.
Comment from royowen
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Yes dear Pat, you're absolutely correct, God will take us as we are, I don't believe we can can change ourselves, if we do it's short lived, we submit and He does the changing, you are very brave dear Pat, blessings Roy
Typo : since I had (a) very troubled..

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for taking your time to review my work and catching the typo. I will fix it.
reply by royowen on 08-Jul-2024
    Pleasure Pat