Morning Music
23 syllable Nanni6 total reviews
Comment from zanya
I'ts a great portrayal of birdsong in the morning - one can almost hear the chorus as the day breaks- ;tweets,' 'cackles.' and 'Loud cawing.'excellent choice of language
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I'ts a great portrayal of birdsong in the morning - one can almost hear the chorus as the day breaks- ;tweets,' 'cackles.' and 'Loud cawing.'excellent choice of language
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
Comment from RodG
You are fortunate to live near a lake where you can hear all these bird songs in the morning.
Good use of onomatopoeia to identify the birds heard.
Your rhythm is smooth and I like the rhymes.
Rod
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You are fortunate to live near a lake where you can hear all these bird songs in the morning.
Good use of onomatopoeia to identify the birds heard.
Your rhythm is smooth and I like the rhymes.
Rod
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Naani writing prompt. This is a lovely little poem. i can almost hear the birds singing. You even managed to put n a nice rhyme. nicely written. Good luck.
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An excellent entry for the Naani writing prompt. This is a lovely little poem. i can almost hear the birds singing. You even managed to put n a nice rhyme. nicely written. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is refreshing. How uplifting can you get. Unless in a film like birds by Hitchcock birds are such wonderful creatures.
They are beautiful. They have wonderful songs they help pollinate the planet. The hummingbird especially does this. It's beak can get very deep inside of a flower and take its pollen to the next flower
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is refreshing. How uplifting can you get. Unless in a film like birds by Hitchcock birds are such wonderful creatures.
They are beautiful. They have wonderful songs they help pollinate the planet. The hummingbird especially does this. It's beak can get very deep inside of a flower and take its pollen to the next flower
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is an excellent four line poem that follows the criteria to the letter and the beauty of nature shines through. This is a beautiful picture you have chosen to accompany your exquisitely written piece. Many times, poetry gets contorted when one tries to cram their thoughts into stringent criteria but not so with you and this rhyming poem. It just flows!
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This is an excellent four line poem that follows the criteria to the letter and the beauty of nature shines through. This is a beautiful picture you have chosen to accompany your exquisitely written piece. Many times, poetry gets contorted when one tries to cram their thoughts into stringent criteria but not so with you and this rhyming poem. It just flows!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
Comment from Colorado Owl
I'm a night person and have always thought that sunrise should be scheduled later in the day :-) I enjoyed reading your poem. "Tweets in the treetops" has a lovely ring to it. Well done. Good luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I'm a night person and have always thought that sunrise should be scheduled later in the day :-) I enjoyed reading your poem. "Tweets in the treetops" has a lovely ring to it. Well done. Good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thanks for your review and glad you liked that line. It sounds better than what I originally had.