Lemon Blossoms
poetry naani6 total reviews
Comment from Lindsey Russell
Very innocent and sweet. Now I wonder what a real lemon blossom smells like. This is often difficult to accomplish with short poetry
Wonderful job with this and good luck with it.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Very innocent and sweet. Now I wonder what a real lemon blossom smells like. This is often difficult to accomplish with short poetry
Wonderful job with this and good luck with it.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much. I have two lemon trees, and the scent is intoxicating. I wish I could share it with you.
Comment from royowen
A beautiful Naani poem you've written here Cheryl, the inescapable truth truth is that we are a connected to nature and as the creator is our connection so is His iHis wonderful creation to us, beautifully written Cheryl, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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A beautiful Naani poem you've written here Cheryl, the inescapable truth truth is that we are a connected to nature and as the creator is our connection so is His iHis wonderful creation to us, beautifully written Cheryl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Hmm, you have the wrong author here, and of course I can't tell you my name. Nonetheless, thank you. I just hope you reviewed the correct naani.
Comment from Earl Corp
I have neve thought of lemon scent as being seductive. I guess that's one point of view I have never considered. Very nice job with. The prompt. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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I have neve thought of lemon scent as being seductive. I guess that's one point of view I have never considered. Very nice job with. The prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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I grow lemons and the scent of the blossoms are divine. Thank you for the thoughtful review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how you focus on the scent of sweet lemon blossoms. The idea of holding back promises adds a layer of mystery to our poem. I thought you did a great job with your poem. It flows perfectly and is a joy to read.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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I love how you focus on the scent of sweet lemon blossoms. The idea of holding back promises adds a layer of mystery to our poem. I thought you did a great job with your poem. It flows perfectly and is a joy to read.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you for this lovely review
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Lemons give off such a sweet scent and yet the fruit is so sour. Some people like it, but I can't handle it. My husband used to eat raw lemons and so did my grandson.
It would be nice if the lemons were holding back some thing because we need for them to tell us about that someday. Look at trees they don't fight with each other. They don't kill each other. They kill some grass. Rosebushes don't kill each other. And all of these things from the plant world create oxygen, they take our carbon dioxide and turn it into oxygen If we had enough trees, then we would not have any air quality problems because the trees refresh the air
Here blossoms has three s'es You spelled it correctly in the title
" Sweet lemon blosoms"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good luck. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Lemons give off such a sweet scent and yet the fruit is so sour. Some people like it, but I can't handle it. My husband used to eat raw lemons and so did my grandson.
It would be nice if the lemons were holding back some thing because we need for them to tell us about that someday. Look at trees they don't fight with each other. They don't kill each other. They kill some grass. Rosebushes don't kill each other. And all of these things from the plant world create oxygen, they take our carbon dioxide and turn it into oxygen If we had enough trees, then we would not have any air quality problems because the trees refresh the air
Here blossoms has three s'es You spelled it correctly in the title
" Sweet lemon blosoms"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good luck. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Wow, what an amazing review. I have corrected the spelling. Thank you for pointing that out. I really had a beautiful picture of my lemon buds, but for some reason FS wouldn't accept it. Thank you once again.
Comment from Colorado Owl
I can almost smell lemons after looking at the picture nd reading your words. You've introduced me to the naani form of poetry. Thank you - well done. (I would just change the spelling on "blosoms".)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I can almost smell lemons after looking at the picture nd reading your words. You've introduced me to the naani form of poetry. Thank you - well done. (I would just change the spelling on "blosoms".)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you