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Matter

with a couple edits, a decent mantra

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Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
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What a perfect poem for the contest! It's great that you used it three times too, with all different meanings. What a fun idea for a poem! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2024

Comment from Bill Schott
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This this antanaclasis sentence matters a lot. I mean, there are a lot of matters in this sentence. My cousin Matt was cool at ten, but at twelve he is Matter.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2024