Comment from
Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You have used your syllables well
with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good comparison of writing to fireworks.
-A good conclusion showing how your
readers would be thrilled to read your words.
-A good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
Pam, what a great review. Thank you!
reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Jul-2024
Comment from
Lindsey Russell
This is beautiful and succinct. It conveys every poet's greatest desire with ease and grace. It seems so thoughtful and heartfelt. Good luck with it!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
Lindsey, I truly appreciate your high praise of my Naani and all those stars. Many, many thanks!