The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Ulla
I so love this, Carol. You work with reality and ghosts alike. Now they have the treasure, what will they do with it. Why do they need it? They are ghosts, for crying out loud.
I have a feeling why though. They are good souls. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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I so love this, Carol. You work with reality and ghosts alike. Now they have the treasure, what will they do with it. Why do they need it? They are ghosts, for crying out loud.
I have a feeling why though. They are good souls. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Give it away!!! They weren't meant to keep the treasure. They were meant to learn about team work, helping others, and feeling good about it without thinking about themselves. I think they did a good job! Thanks so much...Love ya, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This feels like an ending and a new beginning for those going on to their heavenly reward. Madeline seems able to take care of herself now and she has a whole new attitude. Sandra and Michael have found each other and she has an immense task ahead of her.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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This feels like an ending and a new beginning for those going on to their heavenly reward. Madeline seems able to take care of herself now and she has a whole new attitude. Sandra and Michael have found each other and she has an immense task ahead of her.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Yes, they all will be very very busy with their lives and with sending the treasure to museums, clinics, poor people, and who ever it might belong to or help. Thanks for the awesome review and stars, Carol. I hope you enjoy the last chapter.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Things are nicely wrapped up and it's funny that it's the guys that are most interested in getting involved in the lovers' scene. I wonder where Esther will go now and why she has to leave. But I'm sure your finale will spell things out. I still can't understand why ghosts would need the material treasure.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Things are nicely wrapped up and it's funny that it's the guys that are most interested in getting involved in the lovers' scene. I wonder where Esther will go now and why she has to leave. But I'm sure your finale will spell things out. I still can't understand why ghosts would need the material treasure.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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They didn't need the treasure nor did they take it with them. The idea of searching for the treasure was to draw them all together to work as a team and to learn respect for others. Instead the treasure will be given to museums, poor people, clinics and anyone else that it will help or be preserved for others to enjoy. Enjoy the ending....
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
The thing I like about your stories, though I'm really having trouble keeping up with them, it's different with poetry it's easier time wise to process, but the connections we have to our ancestors is incredibly compelling, even th one's our present is connected to , beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy,
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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The thing I like about your stories, though I'm really having trouble keeping up with them, it's different with poetry it's easier time wise to process, but the connections we have to our ancestors is incredibly compelling, even th one's our present is connected to , beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy,
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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I tend to have a trend of blending the past with the present. I appreciate your comments as always and your support. Thank you for enjoying my story.
Smiles, Carol
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Most welcome
Comment from prettybluebirds
There is nothing like a happy ending. I have enjoyed this story immensely. You have done a superb job for a lady who wasn't sure about writing a ghost story.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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There is nothing like a happy ending. I have enjoyed this story immensely. You have done a superb job for a lady who wasn't sure about writing a ghost story.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Here's a hint! Would you believe there just might be ghost in the next book, too? I haven't worked the whole story out yet, but then when do I ever know where it is going. You've got one more chapter on this one and then I posted the Prologue for the Write a Book in a Month. LOL Challenging!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is surely a masterpiece and your most detailed book. I loved the way all of your many characters connected, with each having a specific purpose in the story. Now, with an uncertain future, the unwilling heir must step up to undertake an almost impossible task. Fortunately, she has Michael by her side. I enjoyed the tender moment they shared. This has been a phenomenal project.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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This is surely a masterpiece and your most detailed book. I loved the way all of your many characters connected, with each having a specific purpose in the story. Now, with an uncertain future, the unwilling heir must step up to undertake an almost impossible task. Fortunately, she has Michael by her side. I enjoyed the tender moment they shared. This has been a phenomenal project.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much Lorraine. I simply love how it came together and the message that I brought with it. I hope you enjoy the final chapter. Thanks for all the support and encouragement.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Very fine chapter. The enormity and variety of the treasures crosses centuries. It will be a huge job to figure out what is to go where and to whom. Good to see the unfolding relationship between Michael and Sandra -she has a lot of thinking to do. A lovely encounter between Esther and Madeline ... Whew. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Very fine chapter. The enormity and variety of the treasures crosses centuries. It will be a huge job to figure out what is to go where and to whom. Good to see the unfolding relationship between Michael and Sandra -she has a lot of thinking to do. A lovely encounter between Esther and Madeline ... Whew. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thanks for sticking with me until the end, Wendy. I truly appreciate your kindness and support. Hope you enjoyed the book as much as I did in writing it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A very engaging chapter with action, contemplation and mystique.
The chapter flows freely and a fine tale unfolds.
Very clever writing.
A pleasure to read.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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A very engaging chapter with action, contemplation and mystique.
The chapter flows freely and a fine tale unfolds.
Very clever writing.
A pleasure to read.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you Shirley for enjoying another chapter. I truly appreciate your time and review. Have a great day.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Isn't Noah going to be redeemed. I'm wondering why these three left first. I'm glad Sandra and Michael found each other. This book is coming to a wonderful conclusion. It has been fun to read. It definitely is unique.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Isn't Noah going to be redeemed. I'm wondering why these three left first. I'm glad Sandra and Michael found each other. This book is coming to a wonderful conclusion. It has been fun to read. It definitely is unique.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Sorry if it wasn't clear, but all the ghosts received redemption and left. I just didn't think it was necessary to say goodbye to ones we hadn't actual talked with in the story. Noah was murdered and wasn't there for redemption. He just hadn't left the house after he died and now he chose to stay with James and Lorrie who have been there for a very long time, working so to speak. Thanks...
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Hmmmm. How intriguing this is! Such a mixture of "treasure" -- from guns to fine art, from money to antique artifacts and jewels. There is so much that winds its way through the lives of each person there, be they mortal or spirit.
I'm delighted you've opened the door to the growing relationship between Sandra and Michael...
There are important lessons for each of them - and I suspect "redemption" will have a different meaning for each of them...
The final sands are working through the hourglass and I'm learning so much.
Will there be one more chapter? Two?
This is wrapping up even better than I'd hoped!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Hmmmm. How intriguing this is! Such a mixture of "treasure" -- from guns to fine art, from money to antique artifacts and jewels. There is so much that winds its way through the lives of each person there, be they mortal or spirit.
I'm delighted you've opened the door to the growing relationship between Sandra and Michael...
There are important lessons for each of them - and I suspect "redemption" will have a different meaning for each of them...
The final sands are working through the hourglass and I'm learning so much.
Will there be one more chapter? Two?
This is wrapping up even better than I'd hoped!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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The finale is tomorrow.... and the prologue to another novel. LOL
I think I'm hooked and ghosts and crazy at the same time. Can't wait to see what you think tomorrow.
Love ya, Carol
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Me either!
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