Well Named
My own independenceAs I understand it though not through cel2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is interesting. The man she married, just stays away And it's because the chapter reverse is on replay. That is brilliant. But, as a writer, I would be upset if someone left me just because I was replaying a verse or phrase. I have to replay them until I get them, right I guess you just have to replay them mentally inside your mind, but that makes it harder to write
" now my darling stays away
if a chapter or verse is on replay"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is interesting. The man she married, just stays away And it's because the chapter reverse is on replay. That is brilliant. But, as a writer, I would be upset if someone left me just because I was replaying a verse or phrase. I have to replay them until I get them, right I guess you just have to replay them mentally inside your mind, but that makes it harder to write
" now my darling stays away
if a chapter or verse is on replay"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Our unit is long He the man I adore stays at one end while I write at the other end
Comment from lynglyng
Your poem is very well written with a story. Conveyed throughout. I could see the move and changes that came into your life and feel the independence that you acquired along with the family that was added to your life. Very well done! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Your poem is very well written with a story. Conveyed throughout. I could see the move and changes that came into your life and feel the independence that you acquired along with the family that was added to your life. Very well done! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your supportive review It is much apprecxiated.