Time-Travel
Where the fabric of reality bends8 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
We all wish to time travel or maybe just teleport. This poem follows the form perfectly and gives a nice image of what time travel may feel like.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Hi
We all wish to time travel or maybe just teleport. This poem follows the form perfectly and gives a nice image of what time travel may feel like.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This rictameter, Time Travel, has the proper formatting and brings the secret of time forward for those who could not appreciate it when it was the past or present.
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This rictameter, Time Travel, has the proper formatting and brings the secret of time forward for those who could not appreciate it when it was the past or present.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer!
A stunning and moving Rictameter both in form and message.
I especially loved the line: "Threads of time interlace." = beautiful imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
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Hello, Mystery Writer!
A stunning and moving Rictameter both in form and message.
I especially loved the line: "Threads of time interlace." = beautiful imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I have seen already several entries to this contest. They all were the same. But few of them had the same two line top and the same two line bottom
I like how you start with whispers and end with whispers after some beautiful imagery in between
Here either realities or reality
" Reality's weave twists and turns,"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I have seen already several entries to this contest. They all were the same. But few of them had the same two line top and the same two line bottom
I like how you start with whispers and end with whispers after some beautiful imagery in between
Here either realities or reality
" Reality's weave twists and turns,"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
Comment from bonespur
I very much enjoyed reading your poem. It took me far away to another galaxy and transported my mind to whispers bouncing off of everything. Good job. Good luck in your contest and I hope you have a blessed day
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I very much enjoyed reading your poem. It took me far away to another galaxy and transported my mind to whispers bouncing off of everything. Good job. Good luck in your contest and I hope you have a blessed day
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
Comment from zanya
'Threads of time interlace,;. an intriguing sentiment expressed here where the theme of Reality is explored - some exquisite and effective language here
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'Threads of time interlace,;. an intriguing sentiment expressed here where the theme of Reality is explored - some exquisite and effective language here
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
Comment from Colorado Owl
A had never heard the term "rictameter" before this. I like the way the meter ebbs and flows. Your words do a great job of building mystery. Well done!
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A had never heard the term "rictameter" before this. I like the way the meter ebbs and flows. Your words do a great job of building mystery. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so beautiful. Reading it is like taking a journey through time. The imagery of "voyage across eternal paths" and "reality's weave twists and turns" is perfect. It's a captivating and thought provoking poem!
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Your poem is so beautiful. Reading it is like taking a journey through time. The imagery of "voyage across eternal paths" and "reality's weave twists and turns" is perfect. It's a captivating and thought provoking poem!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024