Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This free verse, Temptation, emphasizes throughout that the struggle for our immortal souls is one where we are often a double agent, working for both sides.

Note: Third line (taught)

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2024

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi, Esther. Welcome to fan story. I'm sure you'll be a good addition.

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

No rhyming. No set meter. It is free verse

The endless war between good and evil. The every day battle (as you called it.)
Takes place in your mind, but also your soul. If one always considers what's good for the soul and does that then good will triumph over evil every time Because the soul can't hate or carry grudges.

Here it should be taught

" Mostly, we are tought from a young age"

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for the welcome and for reading and reviewing my work! It means so much!