Poetry Defined
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this with us.
That's upon me.I feel it's bony grasped! (maybe space after the period. I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to say here.)
Yes As I now gasp! (Yes,)
No more.Shalleth (a comma instead of the period and a space)
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this with us.
That's upon me.I feel it's bony grasped! (maybe space after the period. I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to say here.)
Yes As I now gasp! (Yes,)
No more.Shalleth (a comma instead of the period and a space)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thanks just edited.
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Comment from royowen
I remember the psalms which David wrote, usually when he was in a sticky situation being pursued by Saul, who decided David was his mortal enemy, because David was chosen by God as the next king. Well done, good write, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I remember the psalms which David wrote, usually when he was in a sticky situation being pursued by Saul, who decided David was his mortal enemy, because David was chosen by God as the next king. Well done, good write, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thanks Roy.
Doctor Ricky
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Blessings Roy
Comment from Dr. Nad
Death is a tricky thing to talk about. It's challenging on multiple levels, due to personal and cultural beliefs and practices. For some, the concept of dying is very scary while for others, it is hopeful and expectant. The feelings that are experienced fall largely along lines of tradition, belief, and preparation. The family and friends who are left behind may experience their grief in very different ways but their perspective is often experienced along the same lines. If one believes there is a benevolent God it tends to alleviate anxiety. For nearly everyone the dying process is challenging and impossible to determine length and severity of pain. Thanks for putting in two words some of the angst that is often prevalent at that moment of passing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Death is a tricky thing to talk about. It's challenging on multiple levels, due to personal and cultural beliefs and practices. For some, the concept of dying is very scary while for others, it is hopeful and expectant. The feelings that are experienced fall largely along lines of tradition, belief, and preparation. The family and friends who are left behind may experience their grief in very different ways but their perspective is often experienced along the same lines. If one believes there is a benevolent God it tends to alleviate anxiety. For nearly everyone the dying process is challenging and impossible to determine length and severity of pain. Thanks for putting in two words some of the angst that is often prevalent at that moment of passing.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Doing my best Doc and thanks.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Embrace the love from above.
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Yah I'll write it.
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