The Night of the Jeweled Bird
A gift from the heart.7 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That's a magical story. Sometimes, the Lord sends us visions and dreams to comfort us and even the dreams can come with tangible souvenirs!
One spelling suggestion:
lai of orchids Chris was (lei)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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That's a magical story. Sometimes, the Lord sends us visions and dreams to comfort us and even the dreams can come with tangible souvenirs!
One spelling suggestion:
lai of orchids Chris was (lei)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story. It's deeply appreciated! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You're most welcome! Blessings to you and yours!
Comment from BethShelby
This is nice story. Missing a loved one sometimes make the days seem sad but often at night dreams seem so real and we feel the love we felt before. I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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This is nice story. Missing a loved one sometimes make the days seem sad but often at night dreams seem so real and we feel the love we felt before. I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless
Comment from royowen
What a lovely thing to wish for and receive, children are such a blessing, they can bring such joy to one's life, Heaven is there for those that believe, it has the promise not only of life everlasting but unimaginable joy too, beautifully written Mike, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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What a lovely thing to wish for and receive, children are such a blessing, they can bring such joy to one's life, Heaven is there for those that believe, it has the promise not only of life everlasting but unimaginable joy too, beautifully written Mike, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Pleasure
Comment from BOO ghost
BOO is reading..,guess this is my favorite paragraph. Their bodies wrap together in a powerful embrace and kiss. They fall onto the bed and make passionate love.
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The following day, Dwight wakes with a smile. The dreams of last night fill his mind. He slips off the covers to find the lai of orchids Chris was wearing on the pillow beside him.
"Then it wasn't a dream. Oh, I love you, Chris."
So, it wasn't just another dream? Pretty picture.,the totem pole displaying the bird is interesting. Looks well written, did you have a dream about this story?
BOO!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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BOO is reading..,guess this is my favorite paragraph. Their bodies wrap together in a powerful embrace and kiss. They fall onto the bed and make passionate love.
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The following day, Dwight wakes with a smile. The dreams of last night fill his mind. He slips off the covers to find the lai of orchids Chris was wearing on the pillow beside him.
"Then it wasn't a dream. Oh, I love you, Chris."
So, it wasn't just another dream? Pretty picture.,the totem pole displaying the bird is interesting. Looks well written, did you have a dream about this story?
BOO!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Hi, Boo. I don't think I dreamed about it, but who can remember all their dreams. Thank you for your kind words! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from GWHARGIS
Oh my goodness. This was a heartwarming story if ever there was one. You have a grieving man and he gets one more night, if you will. I do believe in God winks. When things happen and we brush them off as coincidence or a dream. Then we get a real momento that let's us know. You switch from First person to third person pov a couple of times. Otherwise, this was the perfect story. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Oh my goodness. This was a heartwarming story if ever there was one. You have a grieving man and he gets one more night, if you will. I do believe in God winks. When things happen and we brush them off as coincidence or a dream. Then we get a real momento that let's us know. You switch from First person to third person pov a couple of times. Otherwise, this was the perfect story. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Hi, Gretchen. I'm still working on POV. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
This post ran the gamut of family life; mates and the prospect of losing someone you love; children who become the apple of your eye; and who give you the energy to keep enjoying what life you have left. The symbol of the glowing bird, full of color, is like the spirit itself. estory
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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This post ran the gamut of family life; mates and the prospect of losing someone you love; children who become the apple of your eye; and who give you the energy to keep enjoying what life you have left. The symbol of the glowing bird, full of color, is like the spirit itself. estory
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That made me go all goose pimply, Mike, what a beautiful story. I don't believe they leave us completely when they pass over, they are waiting close by. I love this, my friend, and thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done! Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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That made me go all goose pimply, Mike, what a beautiful story. I don't believe they leave us completely when they pass over, they are waiting close by. I love this, my friend, and thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done! Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Hi, Sandra. Thank you for your kind words and shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike