Tall Hatted Woman
oh my what an interlude34 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Heh, I can't believe it, I've never been picked up by a woman and invites on a carnal adventure, my my you are lucky dear friend, I suppose you've held on to the hat as a memento, heh heh, well done, good write, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Heh, I can't believe it, I've never been picked up by a woman and invites on a carnal adventure, my my you are lucky dear friend, I suppose you've held on to the hat as a memento, heh heh, well done, good write, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Ha, well Roy, truth be told, maybe neither have I. Well, at least in this scenario.
Smiling,
Thanks Roy
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Bless you
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was an interesting poem. I'm not sure why she would leave the hat, or why he would want to keep a woman's hat, but it does give one something to think about (lol).
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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This was an interesting poem. I'm not sure why she would leave the hat, or why he would want to keep a woman's hat, but it does give one something to think about (lol).
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Yes, indeedy. Lol
Thank you.
Comment from Laurie Holding
Oh, my word. Something original and smart and mysterious and funny, right here for me to enjoy on a Friday when I should be writing instead! Thank you for this creative piece, so innovative and just plain fun. You get my six stars. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Oh, my word. Something original and smart and mysterious and funny, right here for me to enjoy on a Friday when I should be writing instead! Thank you for this creative piece, so innovative and just plain fun. You get my six stars. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I will now. What a simply
endearing review. Thank you so much. And a sixer too! Lol
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a nice wry sarcastic poem based on an encounter with a strange woman on a horse - like the 19th century setting and the setting of the poem the last line is classic parody
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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a nice wry sarcastic poem based on an encounter with a strange woman on a horse - like the 19th century setting and the setting of the poem the last line is classic parody
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Smiling. Thanks so much, Jake. Great to hear from you again. Things still going well?
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Jake, do you have a suggestion for a publisher? I am losing trust in the publishing company that offered to publish me.
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i have some suggestions. I am looking for a publisher of my poetry too lets talk off line at authorjakecosmosaller@gmail.com
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Thank you. I shall email you tomorrow.
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Ok. You got it.
Comment from Emma Potts
cleverly written piece. Really enjoyed the way it flowed. Will look forward to reading some other stuff you have written. I like horror stories myself, and soon will post my first writing.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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cleverly written piece. Really enjoyed the way it flowed. Will look forward to reading some other stuff you have written. I like horror stories myself, and soon will post my first writing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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What? Fanstory just lost my reply. Thank you. And good luck with your horror journey.
We just lost a very good horror writer here, a wonderful man, that life placed in too many difficult situations.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Doug.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I don't know where you come up with
these ideas, but you do have a vivid imagination.
-You tell a good story in this one, and it
flows well from verse to verse.
-Good use of dialogue when
inquiring about the quarter, and more!!
-She was not the timid sort and
didn't waste a lot of time.
-I wonder whose house it was?
-I didn't have to think as hard on this one,
but you still did a good job with the poem.
-You could always do a sequel to it.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Doug.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I don't know where you come up with
these ideas, but you do have a vivid imagination.
-You tell a good story in this one, and it
flows well from verse to verse.
-Good use of dialogue when
inquiring about the quarter, and more!!
-She was not the timid sort and
didn't waste a lot of time.
-I wonder whose house it was?
-I didn't have to think as hard on this one,
but you still did a good job with the poem.
-You could always do a sequel to it.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Ha ha. A sequel, eh? I thought I might be gone after posting this one. But it did get a better response than I anticipated.
Lol,
Doug
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You are very welcome, Doug. I'm glad you got a good response. Now, about that sequel😊😊
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Sequel?
Oh my, I have been amiss.
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I guess you have, however, I will cut you some slack, as long as you write it😊😊
Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, I loved this poem and the story within. Of course you were a gentleman, but I certainly hope you enjoyed what became before that, lol. A wonderful poem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Hahaha, I loved this poem and the story within. Of course you were a gentleman, but I certainly hope you enjoyed what became before that, lol. A wonderful poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Ulla.
Happy 4th.
Comment from Trent Delaney
Truly an enjoyable piece. Thank you for sharing. I was pulled in quickly and not led astray. Please continue to create more poems and good luck on many endeavors.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Truly an enjoyable piece. Thank you for sharing. I was pulled in quickly and not led astray. Please continue to create more poems and good luck on many endeavors.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you.
I shall try.
Comment from bob cullen
Just read your author notes. A really good write. I loved the black humor contained in this. Somehow, I think the hat may have been second prize. I do however thing, first prize may have produced a bigger smile.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Just read your author notes. A really good write. I loved the black humor contained in this. Somehow, I think the hat may have been second prize. I do however thing, first prize may have produced a bigger smile.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Ya think? Lol
Thank you.
Comment from karenina
It is quirky and witty and sexy and fun.
As off kilter as a fine fantasy should be...and oh, the killer image of "as I lay there, still bound by her thighs..."
The hat! Why am I impish my grinning at that final line?
Tis wonderful!
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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It is quirky and witty and sexy and fun.
As off kilter as a fine fantasy should be...and oh, the killer image of "as I lay there, still bound by her thighs..."
The hat! Why am I impish my grinning at that final line?
Tis wonderful!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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That?s so nice of you dear. I did not know if this would pass muster with the ladies here. But, I should have known better, considering the considerable (ha ha)
poise of the aforementioned. Lol
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We're liberated and rockin' it!
