Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 2-5-2 that is so very trued. I am thankful and hopeful I don't have to move again ever. You used great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024

I am still in the moving process. In 3 weeks I go back to Houston to empty out my storage sheds
Give away half and cart back the rest. It will be a sad day. However, I am sure glad I moved near my sisters. Thanks for the read. :-) Karen

Comment from Shanbreen

Excellent

Yes, the actual process of moving is no one's cup of tea. Your poem, however, gives up on the joys of living in a new place -- "staying" back.
Best for the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024

I am still in the moving process. In 3 weeks I go back to Houston to empty out my storage sheds
Give away half and cart back the rest. It will be a sad day. However, I am sure glad I moved near my sisters. Thanks for the read. :-) Karen

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem captures the nature of moving and the chaos it often brings so well! Love "Insanity reigns" as a description. It's perfect! haha Your poem shares the overwhelming feeling that accompanies such transitions.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024

I am still in the moving process. In 3 weeks I go back to Houston to empty out my storage sheds
Give away half and cart back the rest. It will be a sad day. However, I am sure glad I moved near my sisters. Thanks for the read. :-) Karen