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Communication Breakdown

A doctor discovers the need to use plain simple language

3 total reviews 
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is hilarious. I mean, I wouldn't tell it in a public school, but the story line is very funny and down to earth. Simpler words are always better. Good luck in this contest, and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you, CC999. I?m really glad you liked it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought this was great. And so funny. The contrast between his professional training and the practical realities of rural medicine is great! I can relate! I love your writing style. It does a great job of sharing the story. It engaged me with its blend of humor and genuine human interaction.






 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thanks Michael. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Thesis
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LOL, that was a great ending. I liked the build-up showing the pain and agony John experienced. It's too bad that he didn't know the meaning of the word rectum. It could have saved him a bit of suffering that evening.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you. Glad you liked it.