Ed tries to change the Church
his plan...2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Ed Tries to Change the Church, tells the E-tale that examples Eduardo going through the electronics involved and finding room for improvement.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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This story, Ed Tries to Change the Church, tells the E-tale that examples Eduardo going through the electronics involved and finding room for improvement.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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eh?
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done. The repetition of 'E' sounds throughout adds a rhythmic quality. The progression from Eduardo's eccentricities to existential musings and finally to Ed's exit forms a story that you can follow. Doing that with the challenge of this contest shows creativity and some dExterity! haha Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Nicely done. The repetition of 'E' sounds throughout adds a rhythmic quality. The progression from Eduardo's eccentricities to existential musings and finally to Ed's exit forms a story that you can follow. Doing that with the challenge of this contest shows creativity and some dExterity! haha Well done!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank You! E told me to do it.
