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Dreamer's Drive

using the letter D

2 total reviews 
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem is so imaginative. Maybe too many D's! haha. But you did a good job with this exercise. The use of alliterative phrases like "Delightful dancing dreams" and "Dazzling dreams dragons dream dreamily" adds a poetic and dreamlike quality to the poem. The repetition of the cautionary refrain "Don't drive down Dreamer's Drive during daylight" works well in highlighting that message.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    Thank you so very much.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This story, Dreamer's Drive, completely written using D-words. does a great job in convincing me to not drive down Dreamer's Drive disrupting dragons during daylight.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    THANK YOU