an ode to you
a short poem about my boyfriend5 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Welcome to FS, Max K. Congratulations on your milestone post--your first. So many folks are here to help and review. I enjoyed your well-crafted ode to your boyfriend, and I bet he loved it as well.
God bless,
Steve
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Welcome to FS, Max K. Congratulations on your milestone post--your first. So many folks are here to help and review. I enjoyed your well-crafted ode to your boyfriend, and I bet he loved it as well.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
Welcome to FanStory!
I love how your poem starts, "an ode, to you my love..." It is a beautiful little poem about your boyfriend. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it!
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Welcome to FanStory!
I love how your poem starts, "an ode, to you my love..." It is a beautiful little poem about your boyfriend. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! Your poem was sweet and romantic, and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! Your poem was sweet and romantic, and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! It's a good one! Your ode beautifully captures your love and admiration for your boyfriend! I enjoyed the heartfelt message in your poem. Your word choices are perfect. I love "forrest green eyes" and "freckles that line your face". It shares a picture of his features, sharing both his physical beauty and the deeper emotional connection you feel. This is a lovely tribute filled with warmth and sincerity. Great job!
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Congrats on your first post! It's a good one! Your ode beautifully captures your love and admiration for your boyfriend! I enjoyed the heartfelt message in your poem. Your word choices are perfect. I love "forrest green eyes" and "freckles that line your face". It shares a picture of his features, sharing both his physical beauty and the deeper emotional connection you feel. This is a lovely tribute filled with warmth and sincerity. Great job!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
Comment from Rebecca Barnes
It's important to remind your loved ones how you feel about them and you did this wonderfully in this personal poem to your boyfriend. Sometimes we just need to know how important we are.
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It's important to remind your loved ones how you feel about them and you did this wonderfully in this personal poem to your boyfriend. Sometimes we just need to know how important we are.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024