Carol's Challenge
Champion completes current contest conditions8 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This one definitely has readability and flow and I enjoyed the read. I marvel at your creativity in this challenging contest! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This one definitely has readability and flow and I enjoyed the read. I marvel at your creativity in this challenging contest! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha! Hmm... One would think that this author is a tad obsessed with the letter "c", but then it IS a contest asking for it (to state the obvious).
Much enjoyed! Good luck. :)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Hahahaha! Hmm... One would think that this author is a tad obsessed with the letter "c", but then it IS a contest asking for it (to state the obvious).
Much enjoyed! Good luck. :)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much. Fun review!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"crazy" does not begin to describe some of the contests FanStory, and its membership, come up with. Would have to include this one in the mix, for sure.
Many "contestants," as you referred to them, in these contests can indeed "compose clever creations."
Hand-counted fifty words, so meets that requirement of the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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"crazy" does not begin to describe some of the contests FanStory, and its membership, come up with. Would have to include this one in the mix, for sure.
Many "contestants," as you referred to them, in these contests can indeed "compose clever creations."
Hand-counted fifty words, so meets that requirement of the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Exactly my thoughts. At first I was scornful and thought the contest was ridiculous (and still do) and had no intentions of entering. Then my stupid brain clicked in with first sentence complete. Ah well. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon,
Well done. This isn't an easy challenge, but you've managed a comprehensible tale. My only suggestion is that "causing" may make more sense as "cause" (Conversely, cringeworthy corny crackpots contrast, causecacophonous, clashing, catastrophic calamities. Just a suggestion.
Well done - I wish you well with your continued writing.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Hello Anon,
Well done. This isn't an easy challenge, but you've managed a comprehensible tale. My only suggestion is that "causing" may make more sense as "cause" (Conversely, cringeworthy corny crackpots contrast, causecacophonous, clashing, catastrophic calamities. Just a suggestion.
Well done - I wish you well with your continued writing.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you Phill for your very thoughtful review. I appreciate your suggestion, especially because I felt that was the weakest bit. I have now reworked that part, and hope it is better. Many thanks. I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow, this was quite challenge here and I enjoyed the alliteration and the cleverly chosen words to make this post quite a tongue twister! I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Wow, this was quite challenge here and I enjoyed the alliteration and the cleverly chosen words to make this post quite a tongue twister! I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for this very positive review. Happy you enjoyed it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
wow. You did an amazing job with this contest. Everything made sense and it read like a complete story and all using words starting with the letter c only. NOT EASY! I hope you do well in the writing prompt.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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wow. You did an amazing job with this contest. Everything made sense and it read like a complete story and all using words starting with the letter c only. NOT EASY! I hope you do well in the writing prompt.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for this very positive review and for the good wishes.
Comment from royowen
You've done such a great job of using the one letter C, I don't no how you did, you must be on a winner, I don't think I've seen such a prolific alliterate work before, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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You've done such a great job of using the one letter C, I don't no how you did, you must be on a winner, I don't think I've seen such a prolific alliterate work before, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for the nice review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Thesis
Well done. I saw this contest and decided to not enter because of the complexity of using only the same letter. I applaud your effort and wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Well done. I saw this contest and decided to not enter because of the complexity of using only the same letter. I applaud your effort and wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you Thesis. You are right. With my choice of the letter C I didn?t have the help of little words like "to" and "the" etc. but it was a fun thing to try. Many thanks for your positive review.
