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a 3-5-35 total reviews
Comment from Chip Whitley
I like this poem. Nicely done with correct observation of formating with a patriotic salute at the end for our troops. Only exclamation marks would work at the end of each of those lines, I agree.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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I like this poem. Nicely done with correct observation of formating with a patriotic salute at the end for our troops. Only exclamation marks would work at the end of each of those lines, I agree.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Chip.
Comment from jessizero
This seems like a good entry to the 3-5-3 poetry writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and I liked the way you colored your words. This was very patriotic. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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This seems like a good entry to the 3-5-3 poetry writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and I liked the way you colored your words. This was very patriotic. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Jessizero
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem captures the patriotic spirit of Independence Day so well! The emphasis on unity through the act of saluting the flag is great. What a nice poem to celebrate the holiday. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Your poem captures the patriotic spirit of Independence Day so well! The emphasis on unity through the act of saluting the flag is great. What a nice poem to celebrate the holiday. Nicely done!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Michael.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Write a 3-5-3- writing prompt. A nice poem for the upcoming holiday as a reninder of what we are celebrating. i like the presentation with the flag and the multi-colored text. Good job,
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the Write a 3-5-3- writing prompt. A nice poem for the upcoming holiday as a reninder of what we are celebrating. i like the presentation with the flag and the multi-colored text. Good job,
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from Colorado Owl
Thank you for the reminder that we should come together, at least during this anniversary of our country. My parents served our country in WWII. I long for the days when we were not so divided. Good job!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the reminder that we should come together, at least during this anniversary of our country. My parents served our country in WWII. I long for the days when we were not so divided. Good job!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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This too will pass, Brother.