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July

a 3-5-3

5 total reviews 
Comment from Chip Whitley
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I like this poem. Nicely done with correct observation of formating with a patriotic salute at the end for our troops. Only exclamation marks would work at the end of each of those lines, I agree.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Chip.
Comment from jessizero
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This seems like a good entry to the 3-5-3 poetry writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and I liked the way you colored your words. This was very patriotic. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Jessizero
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem captures the patriotic spirit of Independence Day so well! The emphasis on unity through the act of saluting the flag is great. What a nice poem to celebrate the holiday. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Michael.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Write a 3-5-3- writing prompt. A nice poem for the upcoming holiday as a reninder of what we are celebrating. i like the presentation with the flag and the multi-colored text. Good job,

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from Colorado Owl
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Thank you for the reminder that we should come together, at least during this anniversary of our country. My parents served our country in WWII. I long for the days when we were not so divided. Good job!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    This too will pass, Brother.