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Heart Beat

A love poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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The musician in me finds this one VERY romantic! I absolutely love it and hope it goes all the way to the Winner's Circle! Good luck, Mystery Poet!! xoxo

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you fellow musician :)
reply by Rachelle Allen on 03-Jul-2024
    Hmmmm! Now I'm intrigued!! Can't wait for The Big Reveal!! xoxox
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    :)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 3-5-3, Heart Beat, has the proper formatting and connects the calming effects of the pulsating heart to the gentle inhalation that keeps us alive and moving.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thanks for reading
Comment from jessizero
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This love poem was a great entry for the 3-5-3 poetry writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and the message was sweet. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    thank you