Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet, you have your first vote.

I particularly love the artwork which showcases well your poem about someone enraged.

I like the title too !

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024

Thank you so much.

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Oh!! My theme song!! The visual definitely is what it feels like when I get taken to that point - that flash of white light and bolts of electricity everywhere. Yep, you definitely nailed it. Good luck in the competition, Mystery Poet! xo

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024

Your outstanding review made my day.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 04-Jul-2024

That makes me so happy to read! Thank you. xoxo

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a perfectly wonderful 3-5-3 poem for the contest. I liked the emotion you conveyed with this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024

I appreciate your review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Fused, has the proper formatting and gives some sense of build-up to the outbursts that may or may not be a part of one's relationship with others.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024

I was focusing on the political stage. I get so anergy watching the news, I just stopped watching. Thank you for your review.