Expectation
Carpe diem!6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is so simple and true. You imply the the day might not end as enthusiastically as it starts. Though I hope this is not true. I like that each line starts with the same letter.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Hi
This is so simple and true. You imply the the day might not end as enthusiastically as it starts. Though I hope this is not true. I like that each line starts with the same letter.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
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Don't mention it, gansach.
Joan
Comment from Nicki.B
Oh this is one feels like, is the glass half full or half empty scenario. Very clever, well thought and written, I really like how you have presented the poem also and the clock meaning something different for each reader. Wanting the day to start or hoping for the day to end. Good luck with the competition, a great entry
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Oh this is one feels like, is the glass half full or half empty scenario. Very clever, well thought and written, I really like how you have presented the poem also and the clock meaning something different for each reader. Wanting the day to start or hoping for the day to end. Good luck with the competition, a great entry
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your haiku captures the cycle of each day beautifully. It reflects a sense of optimism and rhythm in life's daily progression. I thought this was so creative and enjoyable!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Your haiku captures the cycle of each day beautifully. It reflects a sense of optimism and rhythm in life's daily progression. I thought this was so creative and enjoyable!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Expectation, has the proper formatting and seems tyo say that the days will always begin and end the same way. What we do in-between makes all the difference.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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This 3-5-3, Expectation, has the proper formatting and seems tyo say that the days will always begin and end the same way. What we do in-between makes all the difference.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an excellent entry in the Write a 3-5-3 contest. It is concise and perfectly describes the coming and going of a new day.
All the best in the contest,
BermyBye50
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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This is an excellent entry in the Write a 3-5-3 contest. It is concise and perfectly describes the coming and going of a new day.
All the best in the contest,
BermyBye50
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from nancy Laine
I like the optimism that this poem projects. It can make the reader feel better or worse depending on how their day is going. But the message I get is that each particular day is fleeting, so why not be enthusiastic at the start of each new day? See it is as an opportunity to learn and grow. I like the graphics you chose. Well written and powerful.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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I like the optimism that this poem projects. It can make the reader feel better or worse depending on how their day is going. But the message I get is that each particular day is fleeting, so why not be enthusiastic at the start of each new day? See it is as an opportunity to learn and grow. I like the graphics you chose. Well written and powerful.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your review. Much appreciated.