Reviews from

While In Flight

contest entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent
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A very strong entry! The image is so powerful it's virtually 3D and skilfully complemented with your 30 syllable warning verse which perfectly fulfils the 30 syllable count. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Debbie. When I came across this picture I just had to use it. I actually put the flag across its face myself with an art program. Whoever painted this is a remarkable artist. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from RJ Heritage
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Very well written, that not only expresses a point of view, but does so insightfully. We may have different political outlooks, but we need to be able to see beyond ourselves, and say what is done cleverly. This is very creative and took some imaginative referencing.
Well done.
RJ

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you for the fantastic review and big sixer, RJ. Yes, we need to all get on the same page and run like a nation rather than a broken one. I really appreciate the extra green, my friend. Thank you again. Have yourself a great 4th.
reply by RJ Heritage on 03-Jul-2024
    You?re welcome
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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You made a good point about the eagle and the dodo. You did a great job with your thirty syllables. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    Hey, Jessi, hi. Thank you for the great review and stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have yourself a great 4th.
Comment from Erika Whittle
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Ha! I love it!!! Hilarious and thought provoking, the best of both worlds. I hope you get to keep your eagle! Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review and big sixer, Erika. I really appreciate the glittering stars and the good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful upcoming 4th and thank you again.
reply by Erika Whittle on 01-Jul-2024
    I'm actually Canadian so today is my day! Thank you :)