Crooked roads call
This poem is about being human2 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Life is like the weather.
There are many lovely sunny days but also sudden thunderstorms.
Alas, problems are part of life . We need to face them and do our best to resolve them
We will make mistakes in the process but they should be seen as lessons/ learning stepping stones, that will help us do better when the next problem pops up.
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Ciao!
Life is like the weather.
There are many lovely sunny days but also sudden thunderstorms.
Alas, problems are part of life . We need to face them and do our best to resolve them
We will make mistakes in the process but they should be seen as lessons/ learning stepping stones, that will help us do better when the next problem pops up.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
I really enjoyed your poem. It does surely portray the how life is not simple. It takes a lot of twist and turns and bends and bumps etc. And your poem captures this very well. I'm sorry you missed the 5 line poem deadline, but can I ask where the 5 lines are in this poem? I took ot to be four as I read along. Thanks for sharing
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I really enjoyed your poem. It does surely portray the how life is not simple. It takes a lot of twist and turns and bends and bumps etc. And your poem captures this very well. I'm sorry you missed the 5 line poem deadline, but can I ask where the 5 lines are in this poem? I took ot to be four as I read along. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
