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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Yum. Very sensuous and romantic and everything being in love is all about. I just attended a wedding yesterday in Long Island of a student who was with me for ten years. He's twenty-five now, and that had to have been one of THE most wonderfully romantic ceremonies I've ever attended. SOOO much love and adoration and bonding was there for us all to enjoy. And then today I read this glorious poem of yours, and it all echoes through me a second day. Thank you for this. I think I may print it out for them and say it reminds me of their strong and wonderful relationship. Thank you, Gypsy. xoxox

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Rachelle. I appreciate your kind words and excellent review.

    Gypsy ❤️
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I like the colors which are alluring. Your usage of metaphors and reflective personification is skillful so as not to be forced.
I Ely presented and expressed.
Well done.
RJ

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 01-Jul-2024
    You?re welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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It's wonderful when the love of a couple can fully express their love and their yearning can be fulfilled by each other's faithful, sincere love for one another.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are well.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
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you always come up with some very romantically sensual poems with cool imagery!
i like the moon and stars reflected in his blue eyes
cool pic, too

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was written so wonderfully. It showed the intensity of love and yearning. The cover of night adding to the aura of passion. This was great. Gretchen

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem captures a magical moment with amazing imagery and heartfelt emotion. The moonlight and starlight reflecting in dark blue eyes create a beautiful scene. The sense of love and yearning is beautiful. It's a wonderful poem that shares an intimate and cherished moment so well.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Michael

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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And that kiss will be so perfect that the soul will be touched. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and the beautiful presentation. I enjoyed reading. Again, perfection.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy hugs