The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Gone for three weeks and about to go again. I'm glad I did get to stop in and catch a few posts. I usually try to catch up and not miss anything, but that just isn't possible this time. It's always a pleasure, my dear. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Gone for three weeks and about to go again. I'm glad I did get to stop in and catch a few posts. I usually try to catch up and not miss anything, but that just isn't possible this time. It's always a pleasure, my dear. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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My day is made not because of the stars but because of your smile. I'm so happy to see you, as always. Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read my story. Better yet, you liked it, as you always do. Thanks so much for the kind words and the stars. You're the best! Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, I think your ghosts are having a field day scaring off all the monsters. This criminals can't kill ghosts can they? I just wonder whether we're talking about the real treasure here? Big smile, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Hi Carol, I think your ghosts are having a field day scaring off all the monsters. This criminals can't kill ghosts can they? I just wonder whether we're talking about the real treasure here? Big smile, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Hi Ulla... As far as I know the ghosts are already dead, so I don't think they can be killed again, but then who am I? I've never met one so I am taking liberty to decide what can and can't happen. Guess that's the fun of writing. LOL thanks for enjoying the chapter. And ...no it's not the real treasure. It's a hoz that was set up to trick them.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The ghosts are certainly enjoying themselves. Tony and Terrance are not. Frankie is going to be really hacked off when he doesn't get the treasure. In fact, this isn't the real treasure, is it?
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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The ghosts are certainly enjoying themselves. Tony and Terrance are not. Frankie is going to be really hacked off when he doesn't get the treasure. In fact, this isn't the real treasure, is it?
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Nope, it's not the real treasure, but it's not far away. Things are heating up and it should all come together soon. Thank you as always for enjoying the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm amazed at how much I'm enjoying a ghost story. I especially love it when the ghosts do something that frightens the mortals. I hope before the story is over, Frankie Saladino and Louie Frisella are brought down somehow, thanks to Sandra's efforts.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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I'm amazed at how much I'm enjoying a ghost story. I especially love it when the ghosts do something that frightens the mortals. I hope before the story is over, Frankie Saladino and Louie Frisella are brought down somehow, thanks to Sandra's efforts.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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That makes two of us, Lorraine. I never ever would have thought I would write a ghost story and be having so much fun doing it. I don't want it to end. LOL I'm glad you are loving it too!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Yi love the they conceived the plan, and used the ghosts to scare the mobsters, they can't kill a ghost, although ghosts don't care for treasures, one can't take them where they go. The sherif is still spooked by the unreality of it all. A good chapter Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Yi love the they conceived the plan, and used the ghosts to scare the mobsters, they can't kill a ghost, although ghosts don't care for treasures, one can't take them where they go. The sherif is still spooked by the unreality of it all. A good chapter Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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All sorts of things happening in the mansion now... Those ghosts are beginning to think its "happy hour" where they can freak everyone out. Thanks for the review, Roy.
Smiles, Carol
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I think so,
Comment from Wendy G
That's an ingenious idea from Michael. And the team preparing the ring of fire being invisible. The thieves will either turn on each other or they'll have heart attacks from fear. Heading towards the dramatic climax now. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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That's an ingenious idea from Michael. And the team preparing the ring of fire being invisible. The thieves will either turn on each other or they'll have heart attacks from fear. Heading towards the dramatic climax now. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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We are headed toward the ending but it seems like I keep stalling, unable to let the story go. I'm having fun and enjoying myself while I hope the reader is too. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Well, those gangsters are going to be sorry they didn't listen to Terrence. Hope the ghosts do a great job with their fire ring and ghost dancing to stop the gangsters. It should be easy for the sheriff after that. Glad that Michael got to offer up a plan!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Well, those gangsters are going to be sorry they didn't listen to Terrence. Hope the ghosts do a great job with their fire ring and ghost dancing to stop the gangsters. It should be easy for the sheriff after that. Glad that Michael got to offer up a plan!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Yes, Michael might be young but he's got a head on his shoulder and maybe an eye for Sandra. Beth told me Sandra needed a little romance besides the ghosts so I had to do it. LOL Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Oh, you clever author, you! Reading about the "mansion of unsettled spirits" banding together to create a blockade of fire from the forest branches made me hoot! Of course! Why not put them to work and spook the (expletive deleted) out of those gangsters!
Benny is too funny. If this were Ghost University, he'd definitely be the class clown!
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Oh, you clever author, you! Reading about the "mansion of unsettled spirits" banding together to create a blockade of fire from the forest branches made me hoot! Of course! Why not put them to work and spook the (expletive deleted) out of those gangsters!
Benny is too funny. If this were Ghost University, he'd definitely be the class clown!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Yes, dear Benny has found a new side to himself and he's enjoying it. Matter of fact, stay tuned when he brings in an accomplice. Things are about to get crazy! Or should I say crazier!
The gangsters aren't going to know what hit them.... or believe it anyways.
Thanks so much.
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
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Benny and a sidekick? Oh boy! I love it when the ghosts cause those gangsters to want to wet their pants!
:)
Comment from BethShelby
It looks liek the plan of blocking off the excape route with a fine might worth. There two gangsters that are ready to flee at the first hit of a ghost. I'm waiting to see if everything wotks out. I hope they all get scared.
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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It looks liek the plan of blocking off the excape route with a fine might worth. There two gangsters that are ready to flee at the first hit of a ghost. I'm waiting to see if everything wotks out. I hope they all get scared.
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Terrence and Tony are simply young kids off the neighborhood block who wanna-be big shots like the older guys. The ghosts are rattling their cage...especially Terrence.
They've got a few more surprises coming.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
One more problem solved. Your dialogue makes this story so exciting. I can visualize each scene as it unfolds. I'm eagerly awaiting the final hurrah for this story.
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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One more problem solved. Your dialogue makes this story so exciting. I can visualize each scene as it unfolds. I'm eagerly awaiting the final hurrah for this story.
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Got a few more surprises and ghostly tricks up my sleeve before the ending.... I'm having a riot of a time with these gangsters and the ghosts. Glad you are still enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol