2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
We have had more than usual clouds this June. Texas usually has very clear deep blue skies. The more clouds the more humidity. That's we've had too. Clouds are beautiful, especially the big fluffy ones. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation and poem with us.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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We have had more than usual clouds this June. Texas usually has very clear deep blue skies. The more clouds the more humidity. That's we've had too. Clouds are beautiful, especially the big fluffy ones. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation and poem with us.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
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Barbara
Thank you very much for your exceptional five stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think I could even have imagined that scene without the image. But the whole post is a pleasure to read and view. Love the imagery of the clouds being chased by the California sun. And that little touch of the wisteria is the icing on the cake:) Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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I think I could even have imagined that scene without the image. But the whole post is a pleasure to read and view. Love the imagery of the clouds being chased by the California sun. And that little touch of the wisteria is the icing on the cake:) Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
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Debbie
Thank you very much for your exceptional five stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
Another most Beautiful Haiku.
I loved your choice of Art for this one Gypsy.
Well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Another most Beautiful Haiku.
I loved your choice of Art for this one Gypsy.
Well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional five stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I like your use of personification of the clouds and the sun. Hooray for the California sun to shine and chase those clouds away. We have had such interesting June weather this year - with cold and rain and hot and sunny!
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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I like your use of personification of the clouds and the sun. Hooray for the California sun to shine and chase those clouds away. We have had such interesting June weather this year - with cold and rain and hot and sunny!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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We have weird weather in Los Angeles too. Lately it has been very hot.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I know you are busy at home.
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
bad daystar! leave the clouds alone and let them cool us! LOL!!
a great little haiku - imagistic fun in a small package
good word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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bad daystar! leave the clouds alone and let them cool us! LOL!!
a great little haiku - imagistic fun in a small package
good word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much
Gypsy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely haiku presentation of your photos and words Gypsy.I love the description of the clouds being chased out by the sun. Haikus are very thoughtful poems, I think and you put much life into yours.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This is a lovely haiku presentation of your photos and words Gypsy.I love the description of the clouds being chased out by the sun. Haikus are very thoughtful poems, I think and you put much life into yours.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful words with tgat cone,alive through personification of clouds and perhaps the sun. The symbolism of hope. Ring restored after sadness and despair.
Thanks for sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Beautiful words with tgat cone,alive through personification of clouds and perhaps the sun. The symbolism of hope. Ring restored after sadness and despair.
Thanks for sharing
RJ
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy