Painfully Obvious
This debate showed us what is already...7 total reviews
Comment from karenina
It was a shocker, to see President Biden so frail, often confused on facts, and barely projecting his voice...
I defend your right to your opinion --
that's what democracy ought to allow.
I don't share your admiration for Former President Trump.
Hey--Very well written poem though!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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It was a shocker, to see President Biden so frail, often confused on facts, and barely projecting his voice...
I defend your right to your opinion --
that's what democracy ought to allow.
I don't share your admiration for Former President Trump.
Hey--Very well written poem though!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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I like Trump because I truly thinks he cares for the country...despite all his character flaws. I feel sorry for Biden, l think it's elder abuse on the part of his wife. Thanks so .much for reading my poem. :)
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It's a very important election -- we agree on that!
Comment from Bill Schott
I guess I like the poem's flow and sense of purpose, though the message for Trump is clearly off track, as, with the exception of James Buchanan, who allowed the country to slide into a Civil War, he is the worst president of the US.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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I guess I like the poem's flow and sense of purpose, though the message for Trump is clearly off track, as, with the exception of James Buchanan, who allowed the country to slide into a Civil War, he is the worst president of the US.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Well, l beg to differ, l think Biden is the worst president. I think that's clear, and he's dangerous with his dementia. However, isn't it nice that we live in a free( for now ) country, that allows us to express our own opinions? I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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Let's not argue about Trump. I won't ever like him, so please accept my apology for a slanted review. : )
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written take about the debate. I think Donald Trump did a great job, but watching Joe Biden made me really sad that someone would put him up on the world stage in the shape he is in. I pray Donald Trump is in the office of president again soon. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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This is a very well written take about the debate. I think Donald Trump did a great job, but watching Joe Biden made me really sad that someone would put him up on the world stage in the shape he is in. I pray Donald Trump is in the office of president again soon. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you, l really appreciate your point of view and agree 100%. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from royowen
I must agree with you it wasn't a test between worthy opponents fit for office, I don't like the mocking and nit picking, I simply wouldn't vote, they make our politicians look most worthy, but debating donnybrooks are, to me, devastating. But I genuinely don't understand why they vote on opinion. I don't like trump, but being a nasty rich man is not a reasonable candidate, that would never influence my vote, but great poem, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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I must agree with you it wasn't a test between worthy opponents fit for office, I don't like the mocking and nit picking, I simply wouldn't vote, they make our politicians look most worthy, but debating donnybrooks are, to me, devastating. But I genuinely don't understand why they vote on opinion. I don't like trump, but being a nasty rich man is not a reasonable candidate, that would never influence my vote, but great poem, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate your viewpoint. :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem did a great job of sharing the sense of disappointment with Biden's performance that I'm sure many feel. Your poem reflects your feelings clearly. It is well written and shares that message so clearly.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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I thought your poem did a great job of sharing the sense of disappointment with Biden's performance that I'm sure many feel. Your poem reflects your feelings clearly. It is well written and shares that message so clearly.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, l appreciate hearing from you. :)
Comment from RodG
Your poem makes the reader look at Biden as he appeared on last night's debate. I agree that he looked "confused and frail" at times. I don't agree Trump "shined on the stump." An interesting format of AABA rhyming chosen but only after stanza 1. Stick to the debate as the prompt requested. There was no reason to mention Kamala Harris.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Your poem makes the reader look at Biden as he appeared on last night's debate. I agree that he looked "confused and frail" at times. I don't agree Trump "shined on the stump." An interesting format of AABA rhyming chosen but only after stanza 1. Stick to the debate as the prompt requested. There was no reason to mention Kamala Harris.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thanks for reading. As far as l know, there was nothing in the rules about not mentioning certain names. Remember that she is just a heartbeat away from being in charge. Maybe if it happens she can laugh her way through it. I don't mean to offend, .l'm just being honest. :)
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But was she mentioned in the debate?
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She was not, however, she gave an interview afterward and let's face it...a vote for Biden is a vote for Kamala. I'm not sure which one is worse. I will be voting for the convicted felon.
Comment from Sally Law
I prayed the real Biden would surface for all to see. Can't scrub everything, CNN! Liars, tigers and bare reality, oh my! I felt sorry for Biden, truly. But I feel even sorrier for America. We done for if he gets elected again or as you said, we get stuck with Kamala Harris. I cry at the thought.
Sending you my best for the vote.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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I prayed the real Biden would surface for all to see. Can't scrub everything, CNN! Liars, tigers and bare reality, oh my! I felt sorry for Biden, truly. But I feel even sorrier for America. We done for if he gets elected again or as you said, we get stuck with Kamala Harris. I cry at the thought.
Sending you my best for the vote.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much. It's nice to hear from someone like- minded, l really appreciate you. :)
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My pleasure. The decline in Biden is obvious and het he remains in office. He's not really running America and that is the most alarming thing. Who is really running America? He was elected to do it, and he can't. It's time to go. I agree with the New York Times and hooe their call for his resignation is carried out by him personally, or by Congress. Either way, our country is in a bad place right now and don't think for a minute our enemies aren't watching. Sal Xoxo
