Missing Him
Moonlight brings memories of sweeter nights.27 total reviews
Comment from Steve Foreman
This is a lovely poem. Descriptive and emotive. The imagery conjured up matches the emotions and the sadness of a lost love. You also chose a good image to support the words. I like this.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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This is a lovely poem. Descriptive and emotive. The imagery conjured up matches the emotions and the sadness of a lost love. You also chose a good image to support the words. I like this.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you Steve. I really appreciate your review and nice comments.
Beth
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Thank you Steve. I really appreciate your review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed your poem. Love the picture. Goes well with the words. I like the words: subdued moonlight. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed your poem. Love the picture. Goes well with the words. I like the words: subdued moonlight. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much Brenda. I appreciate your review and comments.
Beth
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Thank you so much Brenda. I appreciate your review and comments.
Beth
Comment from gramalot8
This is a great entry for 5 lines but also the syllables count. The two combined is a great challenge.
It is a very descriptive poem and I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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This is a great entry for 5 lines but also the syllables count. The two combined is a great challenge.
It is a very descriptive poem and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for the reading and commenting on my poem. It just got and honorable mention but at least that is something. I imagine there were a lot of entries.
Beth
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Beth. I enjoyed reading this verse and applaud you on a creative and well-written piece. This is a tear jerker for me... I feel so sorry for your main character and can understand how moonlight can draw the sadness into the night. Great write.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Hello Beth. I enjoyed reading this verse and applaud you on a creative and well-written piece. This is a tear jerker for me... I feel so sorry for your main character and can understand how moonlight can draw the sadness into the night. Great write.
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Melissa. It meaningful for me. My husband been gone a while but we were together 61 years.
Beth
Comment from jessizero
This poem was beautiful and sad. Lost love always gets to me, and you described this well. You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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This poem was beautiful and sad. Lost love always gets to me, and you described this well. You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you Jess, I'm glad you like this. I was hoping he would have an emotional appeal.
Beth
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, Missing Him, has the proper formatting and sets up the atmosphere to make the fond memories possible and the ambiance especially sublime.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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This five-line poem, Missing Him, has the proper formatting and sets up the atmosphere to make the fond memories possible and the ambiance especially sublime.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you Bill. I enjoyed reading the nice comments on my little poem.
Beth
Comment from June Sargent
There is something so magical about moonlight filtering into a room at night. It's the perfect atmosphere to conjure up sweet memories of love from long ago. This is a beautiful piece!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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There is something so magical about moonlight filtering into a room at night. It's the perfect atmosphere to conjure up sweet memories of love from long ago. This is a beautiful piece!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much June. I really appreciate the review.
Beth
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Thank you, June. I appreciate the review and comments on my little poem.
Beth
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Beth,
Your five-line poem is melancholy; you set this ambiance using 'moonlight' and 'clouds,' utilizing a photo with deep, somber colors.
Your presentation is excellent.
Good luck,
Cindy
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Beth,
Your five-line poem is melancholy; you set this ambiance using 'moonlight' and 'clouds,' utilizing a photo with deep, somber colors.
Your presentation is excellent.
Good luck,
Cindy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thank you Cindy. I appreciate the review and comments on my poem.
Beth
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Beth, I can do understand that. You just said it all in this beautifully written five line poem for the contest. You must miss your husband so very much. I hope this does well in the contest. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Oh, Beth, I can do understand that. You just said it all in this beautifully written five line poem for the contest. You must miss your husband so very much. I hope this does well in the contest. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thank you Ulla, I'm glad you like my poem and understand my feelings.
Beth
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Your poem is beautiful and beautifully illustrated. I'm glad I had a 6 left because this one was so well written and tender, and it spoke to my heart as well.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Your poem is beautiful and beautifully illustrated. I'm glad I had a 6 left because this one was so well written and tender, and it spoke to my heart as well.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Ah..Verna. Thank you so much; I truly appreciate the six stars. There are few left this time of the week.
Beth